feedback

When we presented our idea for the film and what we have for our film we was given feedback as to some issues people had with our idea.

The main issue that was raised was that the layout of our film gives to much away about the story. Originally we was going to show our main character wealthy and safe and then go back in time to how he got there. The point was raised that f we did it like this then it would not matter what happened in the film as you have been told he is fine and he is going to make it through with the money and with his life. This was a big point to consider so we took that section out and now we are thinking of ways to start the film without giving to much away but still having the flash back as we as  group liked the idea of having different tenses in our film.

we was also giving advise on our location as we was not specific enough as we just said in london and for our pitch we was told that we needed specific places and locations and reasons for those locations. therefor we went away and came up with a couple of places where we would like to film and why.

Moodboard

This is my mood board for the original ideas for the story of our film trailer. from this mood board you can see that the film idea that we have is an action drama type idea. this however is only a base for our idea, from this mood board we will develop our idea to make it more structural and meaningful.

location

For our location we wanted places that reflect what we are trying to say about the character but still keeping with the idea of the film. above are some pictures of the sort of place that we would like to film because they fit the story and the atmosphere we are trying to put across in some scenes but also they are allow us to show a part of the character through them. for example, the garages will most likely be a scene where he is alone and is approached by the people who want him to do the job. This location can reflect on how he has nothing in his life but with the people approaching him it offers him a way out.